Fic Update

[dagronrat]

Just a wee notice to say that yes, I have actually been writing Fiction these past 4-5 months.
And no, it isn't Detective Conan fic. >_>;;

It's Original Fiction.

Warning for extreme length. Comments appreciated as it's been... forever since I last wrote non-fanfiction!

Comments

[dagronrat.livejournal.com]

Apart from "because I felt like it"? XD

Humm... Just wanted to accentuate the point of view from each of the three protagonists. Is it too much?

[fs-playground.livejournal.com]

I love it until now. The three different narrators are easy to distinguish. I don't know what's wrong about it. It doesn't disturb the flow for me. :D

Reading the story is like entering an ideal world. I want to be a wizard, too, and get this Mini spell which is so practical (although I ought to learn to change the weigh of my piano, too, before trying to carry it in my bag). XD *dreams

Lovely fic until now. I will need another night to get through it since Chibi doesn't really let me read for a long time. :)

[fs-playground.livejournal.com]

Hooray, just finished it. Awesome fic, really. You should publish it somewhere. :D (I only found it a bit too short at the end, while everything else was detailed, the ending felt a bit abrupt.

[dagronrat.livejournal.com]

Yeay thank you FS! :D

Humm, I did have more ideas for the ending, I must admit, but I didn't feel I could implement them properly... Will possibly poke at it at a later date. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[fs-playground.livejournal.com]

Have enjoyed it very much, thank you. :D I think there might be illustration from the author on Deviantart, too, soon?... XD (For example the cave and the spirit would be really awesome to see. Or/And the two brothers who look so alike and are so different from each other...)

[fs-playground.livejournal.com]

By the way, how come you didn't post it directly on LJ or a fiction site but on a (game?) forum) *curious

[dagronrat.livejournal.com]

That's the game forum that Curry posts his fics too. I joined recently, and since Curry inspired me to write that fic, I thought I'd share it there.

... And I thought the fic might be too long to post on LJ in one go. >_>

Will try to get arts for it done. Have just the image in mind! :D

[fs-playground.livejournal.com]

I didn't know that people share fics on game forums. XD Am looking forward to the arts. :X